Molly Jordan Little

Scribe

10/29/14

Essential question

To what extent to jealousy and betrayal rule our choices / lives or affect our relationships

Homework:

SAT exercises, essay outline,  Sat test Friday, quotes from sources (cited properly) thesis statement completed and most likely intro paragraph done

Sat lesson 8

Went over questions:

number 2 exercise 3 answer proceed, stop

Done In Class

Turnitin.com Sign up

Submit paper through this site

All must go to turnitin.com

go create a student account (new student account)

purpose to cite sources and learn about plagiarism

class ID: 8977235

Password: Smith

Use real name

LPS email and password (something you will remember)

this is how you submit final paper in addition to printed out paper

We also watched a video on how iturnitin.com connects to google drive (link in power point)

SAS writing revisor (ahswarriors) found in Smith’s Power Point

create your own account login (using LPS info) you can submit paper to this and the site will analyze your paper for you. (you can do this by section)

you can also go to her website under resources - writing reviser -  

We discussed

• Set up syntheses essay
• outline
• Brainstorm Topics
• Intro
• Thesis review thesis requirements

For The Essay

Attention Getter- quote cited correctly

(use Easybib.com for citing sources)

Look under “A Long Way Gone” on her webpage- you can see sample essays

Attention Getter

explain it, but do not use lead in or explain ahead of time

explain what attention getter says

then have your thesis after

Thesis statements

title, author, strong verbs, restate question, answer, and why

examples from each book

Ideas discussed in class

what it means to be human

jealousy

betrayal

mischief backfires

loss of innocence/importance

loss of innocence as a result of revenge/ deception

anger affects relationships behavior to self/ relationships

causes loss of innocence

war background causes people to act differently and loss of innocence internal wars

manipulation/power of suggestion rule relationships

togetherness coming from tragedy and revenge

loss of innocence/mayhem changes humans